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THT: Week 7

Posted in Treasure Hunt Tuesday with tags , , , , , , , , , on August 18, 2009 by amareluna

Treasure Hunt Tuesday, week seven.  You might wonder why I’m keeping track of the weeks; its a way to pleasantly surprise myself with my own follow-through.  Sure, we all know that this blog is just for fun, but sometimes its nice to be reminded of what you have achieved.  I’m not sure if its all enjoyment, though- where did the weeks go? I’d continue on that tangent, but its early and I’m not certain I’ve had enough coffee for the really deep thoughts.  So, on to the Treasure Hunt!

Sullivan's Island by Dorothea Benton Frank

Sullivan's Island by Dorothea Benton Frank

“Yeah, he’s about five-ten and has huge blue eyes, thick blond hair and more teeth than Antonio Banderas.  Not skinny, just fit, you know?”

I began to choke on my Pepsi.  She had just described her father without realizing it.  Christ on the couch of life, Freud breathes and Oedipus did the CPR.  She was going to get her little heart broken-I knew it.  I struggled to maintain my composure,   steadfast at the wheel, as we sailed into the treacherous, uncharted waters of romance.

Every time I read this particular scene- from Dorothea Benton Frank’s Sullivan’s Island– I laugh out loud.  Perhaps its because I’m the mother of a teenage daughter as well as someone who can appreciate the ingenuity of including a reference to Christ, Freud and Oedipus in a single, blasphemous quip.

I’ve read several of Frank’s books, all of which I’ve enjoyed.  She has an ability to express a picture of the south that rings true even where I live, which is surprisingly similar to the Low Country she writes about in her books.  Her characters could have been my neighbors growing up, which makes it that much easier to slip into the world she creates.

Another simple quote from the same book that I love comes during a scene full of grief over the loss of a loved one.

She put her cup on the night table, extended her arms to me and sighed a sigh that sucked in the whole room and then blew it all away.  Shakily, I leaned over her bed and kissed her on the cheek.  She smelled like sweat and old perfume.

I can’t think of a better reason to choose these words as this week’s Gem- words that can immerse you in a scene- or in a feeling, like the second quote- should always be considered a treasure.

Better Late Than Never & Black Holes In The Dryer

Posted in Talkabout Thursdays with tags , , , , , , , , , , , , on August 7, 2009 by amareluna

I know, I know, I know. I’m late.  I never posted the Thursday Talkabout.  Does it help if I make excuses? I have an laundry list of them ready for you- I got busy and the day got away from me, I was working, it was the season finale of Burn Notice (oh, Fiona, how I adore thee!), it was bedtime before I knew it…I can go on. No? Okay, then let’s just move past it.

The truth is, I was going to post about a ‘Mainstream’ blog, one over on MSNBC, and the delay actually led to an interesting new post over there.  But we’ll get to that in a minute.

This week’s Talkabout Blog is the Cosmic Log, something most of my family and friends have never heard of.  Its a lesser known part of the MSNBC website, but one of the highlights.   If you’ve never come across it before, it’s written by Alan Boyle, a winner of the AAAS Science Journalism Award, the NASW Science-in-Society Award and other honors; a contributor to “A Field Guide for Science Writers”; and a member of the board of the Council for the Advancement of Science Writing.  Rather than bore you with a list of reasons I love to read Boyle’s blog, I’m going to simply share this, an excerpt from today’s Cosmic Log:

“Last weekend, an eminent panel of theorists (including myself) gathered to reflect upon “cannibalistic socks” and other riddles at the SpoCon science-fiction and fantasy convention in Spokane, Wash. I think we may have made as much headway as the Solvay Conference did back in Einstein’s day. Here’s the rundown on our results:

Where disappearing socks go

Some people have suggested that socks go missing in the laundry because a space-time warp somehow transforms them into belly-button lint and dust bunnies that appear out of nowhere. That’s only half-right. Take a look at this diagram of the modern clothes dryer, then note the similarity to this picture of the ATLAS detector at Europe’s Large Hadron Collider. Is that mere coincidence?

I didn’t think so.”

Interestingly enough, had I posted this Talkabout yesterday (you know, like I was SUPPOSED to..lol) we would have had a totally different topic and the quote would have been more like this:

“Scientists are improving their technique for bending DNA into origami shapes. The latest twist uses custom-made chemicals to turn bunches of molecules into smoothly curving circlets and gears – a trick that eventually could set the stage for practical nanomachines.”

Since today’s topic was much more entertaining, I’ve begun to wonder.  Do you think it was a ripple in the space-time continuum that caused me not to post yesterday?  Some Dr. Who– like stroke of luck that aligned my procrastination with the forces of the universe, creating just the right atmosphere for a better blog? Perhaps, my friends, perhaps.

On a side note, I’ve been thinking a lot about those nanomachines.  At first they creeped me out (yay for scientific advances, but I’d like to avoid living out I, Robot, thanks!) Then I decided that if they can proof and edit manuscripts, I’m in!

All kidding aside, the Cosmic Log is a wonderful place to visit on your coffee break, a source of inspiration and education that, as a writer, I see as wonderful fodder for the next great Sci-Fi tale!

THT: Week 5

Posted in Treasure Hunt Tuesday with tags , , , , , , , , , on August 4, 2009 by amareluna
Kamilah, Kahlils mother. Painting by Kahlil Gibran

Kamilah, Kahlil's mother. Painting by Kahlil Gibran

Its time once again for Treasure Hunt Tuesday! One of these day’s I’ll come up with a logo to add to these posts, but for now, you’ll have to settle for whatever images strike me as appropriate.

Today I found an old gem, stuck at the bottom of the chest and dug it out just for you: Kahlil Gibran on Joy and Sorrow. Many of you will probably recognize it; if not, I’ll be pleased to introduce you to it.

Your joy is your sorrow unmasked.


And the selfsame well from which your laughter rises was oftentimes filled with your tears.

And how else can it be?
The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain.


Is not the cup that holds your wine the very cup that was burned in the potter’s oven?
And is not the lute that soothes your spirit, the very wood that was hollowed with knives?


When you are joyous, look deep into your heart and you shall find it is only that which has given you sorrow that is giving you joy.


When you are sorrowful look again in your heart, and you shall see that in truth you are weeping for that which has been your delight.

Some of you say, “Joy is greater than sorrow,” and others say, “Nay, sorrow is the greater.” But I say unto you, they are inseparable.


Together they come, and when one sits, alone with you at your board, remember that the other is asleep upon your bed.

Verily you are suspended like scales between your sorrow and your joy.
Only when you are empty are you at standstill and balanced.


When the treasure-keeper lifts you to weigh his gold and his silver, needs must your joy or your sorrow rise or fall.

I don’t think anyone will need me to explain why I consider these words a treasure.  Do you have a favorite Gibran quote? If I had to pick a favorite, I think it would be this one (on Self-Knowledge):

Your hearts know in silence the secrets of the days and the nights.
But your ears thirst for the sound of your heart’s knowledge.
You would know in words that which you have always known in thought.
You would touch with your fingers the naked body of your dreams.

THT: Week 4

Posted in Treasure Hunt Tuesday with tags , , , , , , , , on July 28, 2009 by amareluna

“This was the part he did not like on the road into town.  This was really the part he carried the drink for.  I drink against poverty, dirt, four-hundred-year-old-dust, the nose-snot of children, cracked palm fronds, roofs made from hammered tins, the shuffle of untreated syphilis, sewage in the old beds of brooks, lice on the bare necks of infested poultry, scale on the backs of old men’s necks, the smell of old women, and the full-blast radio, he thought.  It is a hell of a thing to do.  I ought to look at it closely and do something about it.  Instead you have your drink the way they carried smelling salts in the old days. ”

Today’s Treasure Hunt Tuesday gem is from Ernest Hemingway’s Islands in the Stream.  Written in a lyrical stream-of-consciousness form, this particular setting description always attracted me.  I’m not sure if its the all encompassing misery he portrays or the fact that the thinker is fighting his own guilt at turning a blind eye to the goings-on in the poorer part of town.

Though the description seems to run into itself, it reminds me of the way we (or at least I) think- jumbled, run-on sentences with seemingly no semblance to order or propriety.  The scene, of course, continues- the character adds in his own distaste at an upcoming meeting as a contributing factor to the drink, then admits that often he drinks because, well…he can.

An amazing little gem buried towards the end of the book, I would say its definitely worth digging for!

THT: Week 3

Posted in Treasure Hunt Tuesday with tags , , , , , , , on July 21, 2009 by amareluna

Today’s Treasure Hunt Tuesday post brings another classic: Lolita, a novel by Vladimir Nabokov.  There are so many gems in this book that I found it impossible to narrow things down to only one. For that matter, I couldn’t narrow it down to two.   Actually, after a bit of troublesome pondering, I managed to select only five.  As you can imagine, I highly recommend you read this book, if not for the story, then for the writing.  It flows in a way that just might be the most amazing use of words I’ve ever encountered.

So, on to the quotes.

“I still dwelled deep in my elected paradise, a paradise whose skies were the color of hell-flames, but still a paradise.”

“Emphatically, no killers are we.  Poets never kill.”

“…reducing the, meaningless to me, degrees Fahrenheit to the intimate centigrade of my childhood.”

“I am sufficiently proud of my knowing something to be modest about my not knowing all.”

And, my favorite, a short little gem that I’ve considered using as a signature line…

“Solitude was corrupting me.”

THT: Week 2

Posted in Treasure Hunt Tuesday with tags , , , , on July 14, 2009 by amareluna

Welcome to week two of Treasure Hunt Tuesday! Today’s gem:

Anna Karenina

Anna Karenina

“The place where [Kitty] stood seemed to him a holy shrine, unapproachable, and there was one moment when he was almost retreating, so overwhelmed was he with terror. He had to make an effort to master himself, and to remind himself that people of all sorts were moving about her, and that he too might come there to skate. He walked down, for a long while avoiding looking at her as at the sun, but seeing her, as one does the sun, without looking.”

– Leo Tolstoy, Anna Karenina, Book 1, Ch. 9

I absolutely love the imagery in the last line, but I included the whole piece so it had context. As an added gem I thought I’d also share this excerpt from Book 3, Ch. 12, since it is along the same lines:

“He could not be mistaken. There were no other eyes like those in the world. There was only one creature in the world who could concentrate for him all the brightness and meaning of life. It was she. It was Kitty.”

What gems have you discovered or rediscovered this week?

Treasure Hunt Tuesdays

Posted in Treasure Hunt Tuesday with tags , , , , , , , , , on July 7, 2009 by amareluna

I’ve decided that Tuesdays need a theme here and, in a rare moment of decisive action, I’ve chosen one.  Treasure Hunt Tuesdays, in case you hadn’t guessed from the title of the post.  The idea is simple; I’ll go through some of my favorite books, poems, blogs and articles and randomly choose a gem of an excerpt to share.  If you feel like playing along, you can do the same.

And now to kick off Treasure Hunt Tuesdays- my first gem:

“Gentle reader, may you never feel what I then felt! May your eyes never shed such stormy, scalding, heart-wrung tears as poured from mine.  May you never appeal to Heaven in prayers so hopeless and so agonized as in that hour left my lips; for never may you, like me, dread to be the instrument of evil to what you wholly love”

(Jane Eyre, Chapter 27)

How can you not love this piece? Talk about conveying an emotion…whew!

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